Three women, three men

by The Angel of Secrets   May 22, 2006


This awful man, so full of hate,
You as his wife is your fate.
He sits on his butt, and he always yell,
He wasn't even let in to hell.
He controls you, and he always shout,
You can't do anything, you can't go out.
You lost all your friends, all your hope,
If this was you, would you turn to the rope?

He hits and punches, abuses and smiles,
You can't even let him hear your cries.
He always yells "Get me a beer"
"I love you" is something you'll never hear.
"I care" is out of the question, gone,
He makes you do things, like moe the lawn.
Then he gets angry, you didn't make dinner,
This man full of sh*t, this awful sinner.
You lived with him, you were his wife,
If this happened, would you turn to the knife?

This dreadful man, without a job,
He dresses awfully, just like a slob.
You have to go to bed with him, every night,
And every night you have to fight.
He wants you, he needs you, in a sexual way,
He hurts and he rapes, every day.
Love is something he doesn't give,
You really feel like you don't want to live.
He's eyes are so cold, it makes you shiver,
If this was you, would to turn to the river?

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  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very forceful poem. How dare a man calls himself a man if he abuses a woman. lol...nice job^-^

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow! that just took my breath away.. it was so powerful and so sad.. the emotions were oozing out and the flow was pretty good! there were just a few errors with grammer but you can always fix those! great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenna Balkin

    Aww..thats so sad/depressing..I like the rhymes..so creative..and it's sad to know that some woment really are put in a position like that...

    Jen
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  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow this is such a shocking poem....its sad to know that things like this do go on in the world this was my favourite stanza:

    This awful man, so full of hate,
    You as his wife is your fate.
    He sits on his butt, and he always yell,
    He wasn't even let in to hell.
    He controls you, and he always shout,
    You can't do anything, you can't go out.
    You lost all your friends, all your hope,
    If this was you, would you turn to the rope?

    nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 work that was so gr8...lotta details..lovd it congrats on gettin 2nd ruyner up on my contest...5/5

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