Thank you for shouting

by SaveMe?   May 29, 2006


Thank you for shouting
And sticking up for your kid
Thank you for snapping
And making sure the bruises are hid

Thank you for taking
Away all my love
Thank you for overlooking
Every cry from above

Thank you for breaking
My little hart
Thank you for taking no notice
Right from the start

Thank you for ignoring
All of the tears
And not asking
What were my fears

Thank you for making
Me feel 2 inches tall
Thank you for pushing me to the edge
Now I must surely fall

Thank you for making sure
I know im not wanted
Thank you for mocking me
No harsh words left un-said

Thank you for getting angry
When I say one thing bad
Thank you for hitting
___when your not even my dad

Actually thank you
Is not what im going to say
Cause I donâ??t think I can go on
Living this life , this way

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i will always return the favor
xxxxxxx=]

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  • 15 years ago

    by Nawa

    Wow that was really good.
    Well written with deep emotions. Good job.
    Wish you the best.

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww hunni, hope your ok, its such a good poem, a lot of hurt in there. well done x x x x x x x x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by Mel

    Wow that was great.
    i loved the rhyming.
    it was really sad.
    good work!
    thanks for the comment too!

    ..mel..

  • 17 years ago

    by Joyo

    Very sad..

  • 17 years ago

    by Kira

    Hey, i saw that your wrote on my poem and i was very pleased =) so i decided to read your stuff. you've got style.. im not sure if that's the compliment you were looking for, but it's the one you're getting.

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