Not My Story

by Mezmeryz   Jun 1, 2006


When I'm feeling lonely
I'm feeling sad
Then your warmth overcomes me
Making me feel alright

Though you're not always around
You're by my side
Your presents so special
Guided me through my life

You're my best friend
Our friendships divine
But I love you
Need you to be mine

When I realise
It seems too late
You've moved on and away
You just weren't in my fate

But I love you still
And always will
Though I loved you before
I love you yet more

Though all you do me is harm
I lay upon my promise;
Forever best friends we will be
All the memories a charm
Over the past I reminisce
All the love which you did not see

Whether my love was meant to be,
Or if it was for you to see;
That's not for me to decide.
But day by day,
Seeing you slip away,
Kills me, a little more inside.

*this story isn't mine- as so the title says, its of a friend of mine-i luv u.*

*where the words don't rhyme, it's meant to be like that, i wasn't aiming for a rhyming piece- i was aiming for a meaningful piece.

*please rate or comment on the poem, it will be greatly appreciated and i will comment and rate back all round. Thank- you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very well written as far as free verses are concerned. The flow is nice plus its very very meaningful. Keep up the good work 5/5 doubtless

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I love the poem and it's words are all to true for me, I'm actually going through a similar situation right now. The flow was great and the imagery as well, I enjoyed the way the poem was written and your choice of words. Excellent job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by CarissalRADIOFACEl

    Aw... I think the only thing that makes this more "meaningful" (as you said what you were going for) is that, even though this isn't -your- story, you still seem to understand what the speaker is going through. Lovely write~

  • 17 years ago

    by Nada

    Awwwww

  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

    I dunno why I REALLY wanted to read your poem!
    I wasn't really intending to read any poems cuz I'm already sleeping in front of my pc,lol!
    this poem was really amazing!!!!!!!
    I loved how it rhymed and the meanings were so nice!
    the unrhymed stanzas were awesome indeed!!!!
    I totally love it hun & I dun regret readin it too =)
    take care
    NemO x0x0x0x0x