What You Don't See

by Mezmeryz   Jun 3, 2006


What you don't see
Is the tears
Hidden behind those eyes;
The light in them
Which long ago has died

What you don't see
Is the scars
Concealed within that heart;
The lies
Slowly tearing her apart

What you don't see
Is the pain
Engraved upon that soul;
The darkness
The light, they have stole

What they don't see
Is the love
That she has meant for them
What they don't see
Is that it does hurt
To harm her in return

You see the cheerful face
That innocent blissful smile
Saying everything will be fine
Her sentiments over the days
Don't seem to change
With a beam her face will shine

That's what you see
And believe it too
It's what you don't see
That's the complete truth

Try a peek behind the disguise
A glance onto reality
That's when you may realise
It is- what you don't see...

*where the words don't rhyme, it's meant to be like that, i wasn't aiming for a rhyming piece- i was aiming for a meaningful piece.

*please rate or comment on the poem, it will be greatly appreciated and i will comment and rate back all round. Thank- you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I agree,rhyme isn't everything..the important thing is having a good imagination and a good vocabulary...and you have both
    Keep it up
    Take care
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by CarissalRADIOFACEl

    That last stanza gave me cold chills up the waheezy! You're an amazing poet! Favoriting~

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    You have such talent, u can write really well, i thought the stanza:

    What you don't see
    Is the pain
    Engraved upon that soul;
    The darkness
    The light, they have stole

    used amazing imagery n was just so well penned. fantastic poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    Hey,
    I LOVE reading all of your work...
    all of your pieces are full of emotion and so enjoyable for the readers. Thanks for doing your stuff, keep it up!
    *Sara

  • 17 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

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