by Meggie33 Jun 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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Watch the world go by, |
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Wow, u have a gr8 gift of descriptive words. i kno i said it every poem but it really blos me away! |
by LadyPearl
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Wonderful job, you may want to double check your poem, "you" should be "your" |
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God child you can write lol good job.! |