Hard to explain

by ♥kazza♥   Jun 8, 2006


Love is the feeling
inside of me
that i get
everytime your around

love is oh
its just so hard to explain

cuz words cant express what i feel

these feelings are just so strong

they never will finish

so i guess love is

what i feel for you

*yea this is really crappy i know but i just was typin what i felt

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  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    This was a cute little poem-short-but cute

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Lol.. this is only a little crappy.. tehee.. the emotions are clear although maybe you should add more descriptions and detail.. this one a little too simple.. it was just lacking a little.. you know what helps me sometimes? i exaggerate how i feel to make it more exciting.. you are still letting out your feelings and you are also producing a better poem.. good try though.. 3/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    The poem was good. But maybe try and use a bit better grammer and spelling. Eg. cuz = Cause. =)

    Very nice poem though. 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 17 years ago

    by *princess*of*no*where*

    This was really cute. good job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mycquel

    I REALLY DID ENJOY THIS ONE! Mostly because I go through this all the time when I try to tell my boyfriend how much I love him and the words just wont come out!

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