Why do i love you

Awww.. that was so cuutee.. i thought it was good! short n sweet! nice work.. i can relate and i am sure many others can too! great job, ill give it a 5/5

Nice write. I like the unique style and there's nothing wrong with it. It's just a form of freestyle poetry. Keep up the good work! 5/5

I really liked it! You could tell it was from the heart and i liked the repetition 5/5

You're right, it's not the greatest, but it is pure, sentimentally speaking.

Very sweet