The Stunning Flower [Haiku]

by Jessica   Jun 9, 2006


The stunning flower
Sways lightly in the sweet breeze
Oh how beautiful..
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Haiku:
Japanese style short poem of 3 lines, about nature or with a seasonal theme. Syllable count of 5-7-5.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    You just painted like, the PERFECT image of a beautiful flower in the wind. Brilliant =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    If you want to improve your haiku (this is something I learned recently and have been trying to do) you should try to omit unnecessary words like 'the' 'a' 'oh' and stick to nouns, adjectives, and verbs. I'd even avoid conjunctions. Tradtitional Haiku (apparently) should try to pack as much as they can into the syllables given, using unnecessary words is considered a waste of syllables.

  • 17 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
    When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
    Appreciated- Truly Spoken

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow, again nice haiku. ur good at those. u get a lot into such a short thing!

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very short and sweet.

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