When you let go. . .

by FlawlesslyTarnished   Jun 9, 2006


I remember the days
When we use to have fun
We always talked so much
We would never be done. . .
I knew what I had
And I never let go
I cherished every moment
I wanted you to know. . .

When you let go. . .
My world came
Crashing down On me. . .

I don't know
What to do. . .
So I held on tight. . .
On to you.

When you let go . . .

A rush of anger
A rush of pain
Came through me
Like pouring rain. . .

But there is one thing
I don't understand
Why did you leave me?
When I needed your hand?

Can you listen?
Do you want to?
Will you leave me?
Say "we're through?"

. . . . . *don't*

*this is kinda bad?*

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  • 17 years ago

    by PatheticLittleGirlxx

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    by PatheticLittleGirlxx

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  • 17 years ago

    by firexflys

    Hey nice job keep it up i know just how you feel. i like the style of the poem keep it up 5.5

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