Just a Memory

by Dani   Jun 11, 2006


Do you remember that day?
The day that I died?
Well now I'm just a memory,
Of that Girl who commited suicide.

I was never happy,
I cried myself to sleep
And everday i felt even more crappy,
When you weren't there.

You weren't there to dry my tears
Or comfort my fears.
You were'nt there to hug me,
Or even to set me free

Well now it's too late,
to even remember our first date,
Or what my favourite colour was
I'm Just a Memory

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  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Really good poem-I like the topic of it---The only thing is that its a little short but many good poems are short. I think you could add to the poem and add more about the emotion because the topic of it is a very strong and powerful one. The flow was good, but the two lines I had trouble really smoothly are:

    ''And everday i felt even more crappy,
    When you weren't there."

    Im not sure why that doesnt flow for me----maybe its just me--idk...anyway very good poem and I enjoyed reading it-you definately have a lot of talent!

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