Your last night

by Dani   Aug 24, 2006


Light the last candle as a symbol of your life
Watch it burn down while you pick up the knife
Take that blade and hold it to your skin
Feel that pain as it washes away your sin

Bleed through your heart and watch the blood drip
Scream through the anger just let yourself rip.
Hold onto yourself and never let go
Feel yourself die ever so slow.

Regret seeks through your once happy face,
You wish could be in a happier place.
The mascara will run, your face will turn white
By this stage, your not alright.

Take your last breathe, feel your last sense
Don't listen to the people that say its nonsense
Close those tired little eyes
And say your final goodbyes.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dai

    Wow that’s all I have to say lol. Great poem.

  • Hye good poem! flow was pretty good all the way through to the end, but the last stanza got abit confusing, but over all really awsome poem!!! well done :]
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Chrissie

    I love it hun! So much emotion in just one poem. Great detail. Love the candle part. Hehe. Your an excellent writer. Xx Chrissie

  • 17 years ago

    by Broken Dreams

    Wow it left me speechless!! Well written, full of emotion!! Great poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Loved it, I write with that structure alot keep it up