The Walk

by Mark Spencer   Jun 11, 2006


The Walk
By Mark Spencer

One day I took a walk
Where dreamers seldom trod.
And I could see the world
As it appears to God.

The Shepherd tips the cup
And feeds the hungry flock.
To see that they're prepared
And ready for the walk.

He sends them on their way,
To choose a path and fate.
Some roads may bring them low,
While some could make them great.

But when the walk is done
And truth is finally known.
Some lambs will lose their way,
And face their fate alone.

While some will persevere,
Heeding the Shepherd's call.
A call that guides them home,
And saves them from the fall.

A fall each could avoid,
By letting go of pride.
Had the Shepherd led them,
They never would have died.

But the proud never bow,
None mightier than they.
If God stands before them,
They might believe that day.

Until He comes to them,
They will ignore His call.
They'll mock God as they go,
Defiant of the fall.

Can you really accept
The judgment of your deeds?
Even if hell's darkness
Is where your journey leads?

Is anyone prepared,
To be one of the flock?
Or will you stand alone
At the end of the walk?

End.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned message. The flow was superb. Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Always4You

    Whoa!! That was truly beautifully written! You really got the point across without really saying it!! hehe that was truly a wonderful read..Keep it up!!!!!! *big hug* :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Wow. This has a very good message to it; I love the last stanza, especially. It's vry profound and thought provoking. This poem makes me want to be a better person. As a Christian, I can truly relate. Wonderful job!

  • 17 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
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    Appreciated- Truly Spoken

  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    Truly intresting one... Something to think about... And something very new... Wonderful poem... A great write!