The Last Thing

by Abby   Jun 16, 2006


She treads lightly across the room, resting in a darkened corner with her head laying down into the cold ground...
A silent tear escapes her eye, sketching it\'s way down her pale cheeks, finally resting as it falls onto the dry carpet...
The shadows of her past stir in her eyes, with the tears glistening in the moonlight...
How can he leave her to pick up the shards of her heart...alone?? How can he have loved her if he can leave her like this?
From inside her pocket she pulls out a gun, the cold black like her soul, cold and unforgivable. It could give her the magic to her destiny, to the way she should of been in the first place...not existing in this cruel world...
With no hesitation but a touch of fear, she put the gun to her head and pulled the trigger...with the knowledge that because she carved his name into the side of the bullet, everyone will know he was the last thing that went through her mind....

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  • I loved it Hoppy 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by stargirl49

    Omg!! this is awesome!! you're a great writer. keep up the awesome work!!
    if you can, maybe you can check out some of my poems.
    ~maggie

  • 17 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Another good 1

    october

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    Ur poem is beautiful. 5/5 it flows and expresses so much emotion in so few words

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow!!! holy shit opps sorry lol well i loved this poem like jenn said deep so much sadness ran through me when i read this very nice 5/5 keep the good work up xoxroxyxox