Xx Lost xX

by Abby   Aug 26, 2006


The sky is black,
I can see the silver moon.
Tears,
Dripping.
Soon I will drown in a pool of them and no-one will notice I'm gone.

Your heart is cold,
My pain is deep.
Life,
Unforgiving.
I feel the blood hide behind my scars and the hate drift with it.

The darkness so vast,
Yet I am trapped.
Broken,
Falling.
Maybe I just want to go to sleep and never wake up.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I like the concept of the poem, but I did not like the format..It seemed broken to me and had no flow. But I did like what you were talking about and trying to get across. Good job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sammib

    Deep and touching abby.. nice style... very well written!!
    Sammib

  • 17 years ago

    by Holly

    Wicked awesome Abby i loved it u rock and i luv u my world:$ lol

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