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by Abby Aug 26, 2006
Sadness, depression /
The sky is black,
I can see the silver moon.
Soon I will drown in a pool of them and no-one will notice I'm gone.
Your heart is cold,
My pain is deep.
I feel the blood hide behind my scars and the hate drift with it.
The darkness so vast,
Yet I am trapped.
Maybe I just want to go to sleep and never wake up.
I like the concept of the poem, but I did not like the format..It seemed broken to me and had no flow. But I did like what you were talking about and trying to get across. Good job.
Deep and touching abby.. nice style... very well written!!
Wicked awesome Abby i loved it u rock and i luv u my world:$ lol