I hope I'll tell you

by Bloomed Rose   Jun 17, 2006


My thoughts were wondering
inside my mind
watching everyone go by
and then I saw you
walking slowly,
you always catch my eye

I turned around,
slammed my locker
my heart thumped really fast
I turned back
hoping to see you
but you had already passed

and now it's summer,
not a thing to do
but pretend like times not real
then school will come,
we'll all go back
I hope I'll tell you how I feel...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Albert

    Hey thaks for your comment at my poem your good

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wooww.. i can SO relate to this.. except the guy knows i like him.. and im not coming back after summer.. but the emotions are the same.. this had a lot of feeling and the flow was good! keep it up! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I liked it! There were a few places where it didn't flow well, but the overall poem was really good! Great Job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Dre4meR

    Very nice...

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Great job, you can add more imagery and flowery words to it. Keep it up

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