Angel

by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS   Jun 21, 2006


Since the day of her birth
People already expected great things of her
Such a pretty and sweet baby
Was uncommon on those days.

And she grew up to open her eyes and discover
The true world behind her toys' barrier
Every of her steps lead to the correct way
While she walked with the lightest smile on her pure face.

A smaller sister she used to have, someone to follow her
The person who most admired everything she said
A weaker girl that needed her hand
To be safe whenever she was afraid to fall.

They were so close, everyday hand in hand; they loved each other so much
She always warned her sister if in anyway she could get hurt
While her little rose always cherished every of her victories
Together there was nothing to be afraid of, like in dreams they happily lived .

But happiness turned into sadness
Till days became nightmares
Till the most beautiful angel
Was taken out of my arms
Since alone in true hell
I remained without your hand.

So the day of my departure
When everything will be over
I promise with my last breath
I will say thanks to my protective sister
For guiding me until today.

And again, your beautiful face
My sister, I will see
And again, you will be waiting for your little girl
In case I feel lost, to show me where heaven is...

To my angel.
TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

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  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    That was soo sad, you expressed it beautifully and i really enjoyed reading it, keep it up and never stop writing, it's one of your natural gifts

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Not doing any favour by commenting so no need to return...
    well, i really liked what u wrote here & spl the way u started it.....there was no rhyme to the poem but when something is coming right from heart...i dont think any rhyme or reason is needed, u know what...u sitting in some part of the world & i in some other...still i could feel within the words u hv written and thats what for me is an art...great work indeed

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by gone back to him

    That was an awesome poem. Thank you for commenting on my friends poem. 5/5 for you

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awwww.. that is soo sadd.. the emotion was clear and the descriptions were good.. the flow worked as well.. nice job! 5/5