by Michael D Nalley Jun 22, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
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If I had a mind to write a poem, but only half the heart |
by Rachel RTVW
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I like this alot, especially the first line. Nicely done! |
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The ending was a bit of a let down, the last line, but the rest was brilliantly written. |
by cYc
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Oh... this one is also nicely written! I like the way you put in words the feeling of someone who has a desire to write... I love it! |
by nikki
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Great job it flowed well and i luved it 5/5 good job |
by Mousie
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Great job and use of words... good work 5/5 |