Rain

Wow hun this is good as a poem or a song! 5/5 i love the chorus xxx

This is just so superb yaar, wow its really beautiful

Teach me how to swim
then drown me in this sorrow
Let me sleep tonight
I'm not waiting for tomorrow

m sure its my turn to be speechless and u surely made me one... :o)
ultimate piece & i stills stand on my words...u r a multi talented person.

all the best and take care
5/5

I think its great ....5/5 :)

Nicely penned down but yaar i m not gud at songs, so cannot suggest u. but really its a nice one.
keep writing

luv

WOW this is really good this is a gaurantee song. Way to go I liked it and if you ever put it into song I wanna hear it