Doubts of enchantment

by David Marshall   Jun 24, 2006


Before we get too old,
before our lives are sold,
make me understand,
why you held my hand,
and made me feel important,
With a mighty breeze of enchantment,
as the sun blares in my eyes,
Is it doubt that I despise?
Because you I can't trust,
turning frail faith to dust,
I had always dreamed,
For an impossible life it seemed.
Treasuring the momenta charms,
like when I held you in my arms,
No matter what I say or do,
My mind digresses to only you.
I had always wished,
you would love me.
We never even kissed,
you barely even hugged me.
Is there any other man,
who can love you like i can?
Is there any one to love you,
anywhere near as I do?
This isn't just a poem,
It's my true feelings.
I really need to show them,
what true love really means.
I want to be that guy,
to give you that ring.
Together until we die,
No matter what life will bring.
I want you to be the girl,
to say the words I DO.
To start our lives unfurl,
to always be with you.
As the night falls,
and the day dies out.
I hear my hearts calls,
but I can't deny this doubt.

© Copy-righted by David A Marshall

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  • 17 years ago

    by Whisper

    David I loved it!! It's like 10 at night and I'm all tired, and I still liked it. It was amazing. And the rhyming... I'm waiting for you to rhyme something with orange. I didn't know half those words existed... Shows how good a poet you are, and how bad a poet i am. Loved it. 5/5 cause its once again perfect

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    First of all, I love the title of your poem, it's just beautiful. I also like how it's written, it kept my attention and your message is clear. This was my favorite part, because I can relate to it:

    We never even kissed,
    you barely even hugged me.
    Is there any other man,
    who can love you like i can?
    Is there any one to love you,
    anywhere near as I do?

    The ending is also amazing, "I can't deny this doubt".

    Good job! 5/5

    XoXo
    Gaby