My Last Chance

Good work. I thought you did a good job. Some of the rhymes feel a bit forced.

It was absolutely lovely the rhyme was great made for a easy to read well flowing poem, i loved it another great poem xxALLYxx

Aww.. that's so sad. Made me cry cause I can relate to it alot (minus the dancing part) but you did a great job on this. It flowed very well and was easy to read and it was filled with so much emotion. My favorite lines were:
turning my dreams
into violent screams
memories filled with tears
as the song ending nears
Those really stood out to me, Great job on this! 5/5

Well, i can definitely relate to this alot..that is so sweet, i loved it! You kind of confused me, but it's ok towards the end i knew what you were saying!!! Keep it up 5/5

It was short but so emotional and powerful. Sometimes it is short two-lined poems or so that make the biggest powerful difference. There was a nice flow to it, and I totally understood what I was reading. Great work! Keep it up! 5/5