First Sign

by SilenceBreaksTheHeart   Jun 25, 2006


Dreams
fall from my grasp
making me see the distorted reality of the world
for the first time.
Ready to crush all of my hopes at the first sign of
doubt.

Fears
fill the rifts in my mind
making me a captor of myself.
Ready to overtake me at the first sign of
anxiety.

Screams
echo through my soul
making me a walking time bomb.
Ready with explosive sound at the first sign of
pain.

Tears
fill the cracks in my heart
making inside of me a raging river of sorrow.
Ready to drowned me at the first sign of
defeat.

Please rate and comment...it means so much. Thank you :D
And I worked hard on this so please do not steal any of my lines or anything like that. thanks xD

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  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I really loved how you described tears filling the cracks in your heart...that was a really unique way to word that...great job! 5/5!
    ~Jules

  • 17 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Omg wow this is amazing.. i lvoe ur work.. ur so talented. this is a great poem. u should b proud! i relaly like it.. i like the flow and word choice.. its great.. keep writing... great job 5/5
    take care
    luve angie

  • 17 years ago

    by *Cosmic*Whispers*

    Wow this is beautiful, I really love the rhyme scheme you used, you should be really proud
    5/5
    love
    Xx-me-xX

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