Same thing over again

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Jun 27, 2006


In the darkness he lurks
Creeping along thin lines
Of fear and death
Watching the kids play
Climbing rotting trees
Running through deadly vines
Twigs break beneath his feet
As he holds his breath
Waiting for the right time to strike
Hidden behind a tree
A little child passes
He grips his hand around the childs mouth
And pulls him out of sight
And drags the little girl deeper in the forest
He duct tapes her mouth
And ties her hands together
Forces her to walk
Deeper and deeper back
To a place he knows no one will find her
It seems like forever
Until he told her to stop
And lay down on the ground
The grounds hard from the cold
And misting dew is settleing in
As she lays there
In the wetness
He tells her to close her eyes
And she wont feel a thing
He lifts her dress
And does the same thing all over again
Hearing her whimpers
Is what he loves
After hes done
He leads her over to a long rope
And tells her to climb up
And slip her head through the neck hole
And tightens it up
And tips the stool under her
Walking away for her to struggle
So he can lurk in the darkness
And find another little child
To terrioze and muder

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow this is really good again...ur a awsome poet...this is really sad.....
    a 5/5 for me!!! again!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Damien

    It's a good poem, I didn't like it for the content but it's good!

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    4EvEr --
    Great job! I don`t think I`ve ever read a poem quite like this ;; it was definitely unique, and the format was different than most poems. The rhymes were unexpected and complex ;; it added a really nice twist to your poem. The flow throughout the poem was perfect. Better than most poems I`ve recently read. Great job.
    5/5

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    O wow-I am speechless. Everything about that poem is perfect...except on the last line you spelled murder wrong--It is so deep and powerful. It gave me the chills----Amazing write! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by DontWorryAboutIt

    Wow...that's all i can say..