Vanished Charm [Not An Object]

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   Jun 29, 2006


Behind the counter, I serve the customers.
You step up, waiting patiently.
Our eyes meet, we maintain our contact.
Slowly, a smile edges onto your lips.

As I take your order, our contact breaks.
Your eyes wander, no longer focused on my face.
As you seem to evaluate me, watch my mouth tighten.

Flattery slowly turns to disgust:
Why does it always end like this?
Whatever charm you may have just vanished.

Quickly, I hand over your order, disgusted.
As you turn to walk away, "jerk" escapes my lips.
You whirl to face me, as I flash you my smile.

You picked the wrong girl to treat as an object.

*yeah... not really a poem, but i'm pissed. i absolutely can't stand it when a guy undresses u with his eyes... that's just completely disrespectful... and don't even get me started with the honking and whistling!.. am i the only one who gets frustrated?!

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  • 17 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Brilliant hun and truthful i hate jerks like that! take care xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Deary!

    One! YAY NEW POEM *dances for you*

    Two! My god I hate when guys do this its like if you want boobs and a butt go see a hooker okay? x_x

    Three! Yippee new poem lol. its wonderful though seems a bit off.... but I like it, it has some sort of ... rough edge to it that gives it flare =D

    As I take your order, our contact breaks.
    Your eyes wander, no longer focused on my face.
    As you seem to evaluate me, watch my mouth tighten.

    Niice!

    Love always Jenn