To love again

by Sweet lig   Jun 30, 2006



All I thought that you are the one
Who makes my life colorful?
I sincerely loving you all my life
Dying to love you all the way
I've give'n you all my soul
Also my pride I had,

But, I never think
I was disappointed,
When I found that your heart...
Beats to someone else!
Wounds in my heart
Not easy to heal

My mind bothers so many things
Thinking...and asking my self,
Why? Why, what I did wrong?
I just love you in real!

Days, weeks, months
And years are gone...
Pain never forget
Till one day I realize...
And thinking...why?
I should turns my life
To someone like you?

Hoping, there's some people Surrounds me
It's more worthy than you!
Never expect, I fall in love again,
And never noticed,
The pain you've done
Suddenly fades away
And my heart beats so fast!

Now, I'm moving on
My wounded heart cures
My heart beats so fast
And starts to love again!

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  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    It seems like a nice poem, but it needs a littel work on it. Something about it didn't seems right to me. Maybe if you worked on it a bit, it would look better. 4/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    I really do not knwo what to say about this poem, it was good, the flow was good the rhyming was good so it was a good poem i just do not know what else to sya baout it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    Um i'm not sure what to think of this piece I think I know what you were trying to say but everything just seamed a little bit off.

  • 16 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    Nice job. There are some questionable punctuation and some grammatical errors. Keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Nice poem with flowing mournful feelings. I would have really caught you on the grammar part but the poem being in slang category its ok. Keep it up dear. tc

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