What's this for?

by Sweet lig   Jun 30, 2006


What is love for?
when you end up in tears
what is courage?
when you fight your tears
whats the use of hope burning like candle light?
when its blown away by the despair of the night!

what is smile for?
when deep inside envy is grinning their trying to hide
whats the use of peace and prosperity?
when u think of war as a good remedy.

what is life for given by god above?
when you don't know how to love
whats the use of time running out fast?
when you waste your time regretting the past.

whats the use of humility in your heart?
when pride and greed is tearing you a part
what is cleanliness for?
when everything is a mess
why do we always pretend?
instead of thinking and trying to comprehend.

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  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    This is a really good poem. I love the way you wrote it. Great job! 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    This is my favorite piece from you so far it has good flow due to the reputation it has a clear message and a lot of emotion.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow this is extremely great. Such a beautifully written poem. The rhetorical questions really made me to ponder and cudgel my brain. I kept me engaged. max ratings dear tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I can tell how much you've improved
    but this poems a lil weak
    and i think that you repeated words alot which made it sound funny

  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Another great poem.. i love it .. it makes you think about the answers to these questions.. the only thing is that some seemed unnecessary .. like you only put them in the poem because it rhymes

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