Had to Go?

by Ike Dizzle   Jun 30, 2006


Why did you have to go
You left too soon
Youre resting now
Above the sun or moon

You were one of the
Nicest people I ever met
One of those people
That no one will forget

You were the only one
Who spoke to me
At camp, the only one
Who ever comforted me

My memories with you
Will stay in my head
I will miss you, Estovy
Im sorry youre dead.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I liked the last two lines of the first stanza, it was a good way of putting death. Even though, they were the same words and the end of every other line, stanza three was my favorite, but I don't know why.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Awww, this is sad.. And hope u can find the way to get yourself better comfort, filling spot for you. Nicely done!

  • 16 years ago

    by lisa

    This is a great poem hun...you did a great job...5/5..im sorry i hope you find comfort.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is an awesome piece.The feelings of friendship and love and loss are conveyed very well, but it is the ending that really has such a powerful impact.Blown away.Great piece.

    GaryJ

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychel

    ...the last stanza seemed slightly...i dont know...morbid i guess...but im not saying morbid is bad lol! i love how u put this...straight to the point. 5/5
    ~Ray

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