A p a r t

by ♥ღ alwayz... forgotten ღ♥   Jul 5, 2006


Feel the pain I'm feeling
do you hear me crying?
i didn't wanna do it
i had to from your lieing

i said goodbye once
and ill say it again
it rips me up inside
when i hear your name

see your face in my dreams
and feel you in my heart
I never wanted to see the day
that we had to grow apart. . .

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  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Far more info packed into the short lines and stanzas. If you care there's some spelling errors that kinda messed with the flow like "see you face" where you should be your to give it a better flow. And then there's "i had to from" which has a word missing between the 'to' and 'from'. Okay tons of info in a short piece that was really quite cool for what it contained.
    ~Faith-less

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aw, That was sad. I thought it was really good though. In three short stanza's you expressed alot. I really liked the ending. It was great! Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

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