Want it to end

by ♥ღ alwayz... forgotten ღ♥   Aug 25, 2006


I'm done, its over, I'm gone
this is now my last fall
theres nothing left of me
cause you have taken it all

you never seemed to care
i know you at least saw
you asked once or twice
but never understood i was tore

i thought i meant something
but now every things a lie
and now when i think of you
I'm not happy i wanna die

you used me and you know it
how could you do it to me
when iv gone through so much
& not even half of it you seen

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  • 19 years ago

    by facedownindirt

    I thought that this was a fairly good poem. The only thing you should try to look out for is your grammer.

    For example:

    "you used me and you know it
    how could you do it to me
    when iv gone through so much
    & not even half of it you seen"

    Try this:

    "You used me and you know it
    how could you do it to me.
    When I'VE gone through so much
    AND not even half of it YOU'VE seen"

    Other than that you are a very talented writer. Fix thoes mistakes and you're amazing! = ]

  • 19 years ago

    by Marissa

    I love your poem!
    I think that you have put alot of your emotions into it and that is really good!
    I hope that you keep on writting!
    I love your work!

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