Is it Safe?

by Lisa   Jul 7, 2006


Is it safe to say "I love you"
in time will those three words make me blue
Will your love sweep me away?
Will you put me in an everlasting daze?
AmI the girl of your fantasies?
or Am I the girl of your bad calamity?
Will you be everything I ask for
or will you be ugly and poor?
If you do treat me like a princess,
Our relationship will be a success.
So i ask you.....
.....Is it safe to say "I love you"?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Darlena

    I TH0UGHT THiS P0EM WAS 0K.
    iT SH0ULD HAS BEEN A LiL` M0RE EXPANDED.
    && THE RHYMiNG MAKE THE P0EM A LiL` TACKY.
    Y0U HAVE SUM GREAT iDEAS, BUT i THiNK
    iT`S NEED T0 BE EXPANDED. BUT S0O FAR WHAT U HAVE iS GREAT. N0O DiSRESPECT !

    FEEL FREE T0 CUM & CHECK 0UT MY P0EMS WHEN U GET THE CHANCE. THANX. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by angela

    It's so cool

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa Lea

    You have targeted a question that I am sure every girl asks herself at some point. Very well written. Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    Excellent poem! i loved every bit of it specially the ending! and thx for the beautiful comment on my poem
    Much love
    Take care
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    I thought it was very good
    but i feel like it should longer
    like you have more to say
    and you should
    its Love
    words are limitless haha
    thank you for your comment
    take care

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