Unexplainable

by Lisa   Jul 19, 2006


Unexplainable
would describe how I feel about you.
There aren't enough words in the world,
to explain my love for you in detail
but I'm going to give it a try
Losing you would make me sit up every night and cry
You light up my day, with a simple "hey".
When I'm around you I get a certain feeling
Like the clothes on my body is all of a sudden peeling.
I tell you I love you because it comes from my hearrt,
which is no longer blue.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Awww thats a sweet poem! :D

  • 17 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Short and sweet. I like that. It was very emotional. The flow was very good, but I think the last line seems out of place... maybe try rewording it, or even just omitting it altogether. It would certainly make the ending a lot more strong. A last line of a poem is pretty crucial, so that's why I suggest changing it a bit. Anyway, I like the idea behind this poem. Original and very nice. Overall rating: 4.6/5. Good job. Keep up the good work :)

    ~BJ~

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    Loved it! ..5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    I like it Lisa. it made me happy. I feel like this about a person too. So I can relate. :)

    5/5 def.

    >black&&blue

Read All Comments (4)

More Poems By Lisa