The flower

by Lisa   Jun 20, 2006


When the sun shine, the flower grew.
When the sun fade and it began to non-stop rain the flower died.
wanting its roots and stem to receive sunlight,
but it non-stop rain.
Not understanding why the raining cloud is on the flower
and the trees and plants are receiving sunlight.
Wanting the cloud to move.
Wanting to grow again.
but still it rain until the flower got damp and wet.
Wanting to get dry.
Wanting to see the sunlight,
wanting to live again.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Hey thnx for the r/c on mine. i cant look at love poems cuz my pc, so this is the closest. i really like this, it was very descriptive i liked that. it was a an all around gr8 poem, i liked this a lot.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow this is really good. I like the metaphor that you had going on (at least I think you did, I hope so) but either way, i saw a metaphor in it. Like a person is the flower.. The rain/cloud is maybe a problem in their life. Yep, great job on this :)

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