Comments : The Beauty Of Music

  • 13 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Very unique! Ive never read a poem anything like this. It has a great flow and is so true. I know music is my life not just a word. Great poem-everything in it is worded wonderfully! 5/5 Keep it up!

  • 13 years ago

    by Juls

    [ good job, i never seen some1 write like this before so its a first for me. Just confused me at the lryic part when you said Bach and Motzart b/c they didnt have lyrics, but after i read it again i understond.]

    Keep writing your work is wonderful

    Juls

  • 13 years ago

    by Cayce

    Wow! I really really REALLY liked this, because I love music so much. It was a very good poem. So unique, I don't think I've read a poem like this. You did a beautiful job on it. Keep it up!!

    Cayce x

  • 13 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Hey,

    This was such a great poem, it had a different kind of structure, which made it interesting to read.

    I really loved this part

    "Bach, Motzart
    not only composers nor
    musical terms
    but the building blocks"

    Great work

    --Steph

  • 13 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Awesome! Totally excellent! This is definatley my favorite. I sooo feeel the same way about music. It was great, It flowed wonderfully. It was also so very unique. Great job

    Please r/r/c the best and my mistake!
    thanks

  • 13 years ago

    by Chris

    This is great..I like the format and you have a unique style
    i gave it a 5/5 becase of the thoughts and the message.
    Great Job

  • 13 years ago

    by Mousie

    Very nice... and it was all true... thanks for the comments and i'm on my way to comment your others!

  • 13 years ago

    by Miss Pipp

    Well every one else has summed up what I was going to say but it's a reallllly good poem. It's so true and wow another teenager who knows who Bach and Motzart are!! =]

    Pip xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This poem is so good! It's very thought provoking, and it was also well thought out. You did a great job on this. The flow and rhythm of it was really good. My favorite part was:
    LYRiCS,
    are not only "words to a song"
    but inspirational dialogue
    I love the way that you described it. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, that was a great poem. Music is beautiful isn't it. However, I do think there is a definition to music, and to sound and all that sort of thing, it's technical, but there is meaning. Also, music hold different meaning to other people, you said that yourself, so you are somewhat contradicting yourself.

    "but one of which has no meaning"
    [change it to..
    'but one which meaning is vague']

    Just a suggestion.. good stuff though, I really enjoyed it!

  • 13 years ago

    by not a poet

    Beautifully true! love it, people should know the beauty of music, but it seems no one does now a days!

  • 13 years ago

    by NannO

    This is good.. more like an essay than a poem, tho.. u cited examples and presented details and showed the reader music from ur own point of view..
    looking at it from an essay point of view, i can say that its good, not that bad (its too short for an esay, and structure-wise it doesnt match)
    but i cant look at it as poetry either.. its all about imagery and feel of words.. however, i def loved wat u had to say about music, and im giving u the credit for that.. beautiful words about something u love..
    keep it up 4/5
    take good care
    thnx 4 the comment
    NannO

  • 13 years ago

    by Natalie

    That was beautiful Sam. I for one love music and couldn't survive without. I thought the way you set this poem out and all was different, but I liked it. Keep it up hun.

    `Taleeee. xx.

  • 13 years ago

    by holly

    Beautiful poem, very oiginal style i love the way you described music, i personally am a misical person and i love it and yeah well i can really relate you have expressed this beautifully. xxALLYxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Tammie

    Hey. yes im tammie, the one you have been PMing. Thanks for the comment. I love music myself and i think this poem writes about it very well. Nothing can describe music well enough. It is different for each and every person. I think you expressed everything so well. I have never, like many people who commented on this poem, have never read anything like this poem. Very original. Keep up the great work, looking forward to reading more. Your a great writer.
    Much love,
    Tammie

  • 13 years ago

    by Tanya

    Heya hunny i realy love the poem it has pure meaning and understading of how things are well done keep it up mwah xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by None

    Lyrics are not only, "words to a song",
    but inspirational dialogue.

    I think that this is true. I have always wanted to write about the captivating effects of music, but never actually sat down and took the time to. You should revise this poem. Correct the spelling, and fix all the words that are in all capitals- that will take your poem to new heights. When a great peice is created with diligence and respect to what is correct, people will notice.

  • 13 years ago

    by .. !!-D a R r i N-!! ..

    This is so true in more ways than one. Music has it's own meaning to everyone. I can personally relate because i cannot go through a day without listening to my music. You captured all the key points behind what music really means.

    -Darrin

  • I Think This Poem Speaks So Much Truth, And I Believe If Some Of The Music Artist Of This Century Would Listen To The Message You've Delivered In This Poem They Would See The Importance Of The Meaning Of The Songs They Put Out Rather Than The Amount Of Money Their Bringing In
    Keep Being Encouraging 5/5
    xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • By The Way Sweets, I Read & Voted On Two Of Your Other Poems But My Computer Dosen't Let Me Comment On Poems In The Love/Friendship Category...I May Need To Restore It But Trust Me Your An Awesome Writer And You Still Have My 5.0s! Kudosxox
    Nikk-