[ good job, i never seen some1 write like this before so its a first for me. Just confused me at the lryic part when you said Bach and Motzart b/c they didnt have lyrics, but after i read it again i understond.]
This poem is so good! It's very thought provoking, and it was also well thought out. You did a great job on this. The flow and rhythm of it was really good. My favorite part was:
are not only "words to a song"
but inspirational dialogue
I love the way that you described it. Great job on this! 5/5
Wow, that was a great poem. Music is beautiful isn't it. However, I do think there is a definition to music, and to sound and all that sort of thing, it's technical, but there is meaning. Also, music hold different meaning to other people, you said that yourself, so you are somewhat contradicting yourself.
"but one of which has no meaning"
[change it to..
'but one which meaning is vague']
Just a suggestion.. good stuff though, I really enjoyed it!
This is good.. more like an essay than a poem, tho.. u cited examples and presented details and showed the reader music from ur own point of view..
looking at it from an essay point of view, i can say that its good, not that bad (its too short for an esay, and structure-wise it doesnt match)
but i cant look at it as poetry either.. its all about imagery and feel of words.. however, i def loved wat u had to say about music, and im giving u the credit for that.. beautiful words about something u love..
keep it up 4/5
take good care
thnx 4 the comment
Hey. yes im tammie, the one you have been PMing. Thanks for the comment. I love music myself and i think this poem writes about it very well. Nothing can describe music well enough. It is different for each and every person. I think you expressed everything so well. I have never, like many people who commented on this poem, have never read anything like this poem. Very original. Keep up the great work, looking forward to reading more. Your a great writer.
Lyrics are not only, "words to a song",
but inspirational dialogue.
I think that this is true. I have always wanted to write about the captivating effects of music, but never actually sat down and took the time to. You should revise this poem. Correct the spelling, and fix all the words that are in all capitals- that will take your poem to new heights. When a great peice is created with diligence and respect to what is correct, people will notice.
This is so true in more ways than one. Music has it's own meaning to everyone. I can personally relate because i cannot go through a day without listening to my music. You captured all the key points behind what music really means.
I Think This Poem Speaks So Much Truth, And I Believe If Some Of The Music Artist Of This Century Would Listen To The Message You've Delivered In This Poem They Would See The Importance Of The Meaning Of The Songs They Put Out Rather Than The Amount Of Money Their Bringing In
Keep Being Encouraging 5/5
By The Way Sweets, I Read & Voted On Two Of Your Other Poems But My Computer Dosen't Let Me Comment On Poems In The Love/Friendship Category...I May Need To Restore It But Trust Me Your An Awesome Writer And You Still Have My 5.0s! Kudosxox