My Beautiful Suicide

by Vane   Jul 10, 2006


I can feel your cold eyes
on top of me
thinkin the worse of me
and blaming me for everything

But dont judge me
if you dont understand
what it feels like
when you want to take
your last breath
leave all the insanity behind
and begin a new life

I'm afraid of the thought
of leaving you behind
cause you made it all worth the while
you made me feel special inside
and when i was with you everything seemed alright
I was in peace in body and mind

But I can't stay in this world
and I'm sorry to say
that I wish that every breath I take
is gas so it will be
my beautiful suicide

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  • 17 years ago

    by Spikie

    Very very deep and i love it

  • 17 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    My boyfriend broke up with me a few months ago and i felt that way too.. and for other reasons. i especially related to this part.
    But dont judge me
    if you dont understand
    what it feels like
    when you want to take
    your last breath
    leave all the insanity behind
    and begin a new life

    but hang in there girl! great poem, and thanks for your comment =)

  • 17 years ago

    by XDyingx-In-xVeinX

    I really liked it and i could relate to it, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Disturbed Poet

    I like this......very well written.....i understand these feelings completely.....i often think things like this....well done....5/5

    ~TDP~

  • 17 years ago

    by HarryPotterlover

    Oh my, thats wow, just wow

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