A broken friendship

by Sweet lig   Jul 11, 2006



I remember the days
When we still friend
And we happy together
The sweet memories
That you've left
Still flashing on me

I will always smile
Every time i think
About our past
I always rely that time
That nobody can't
Destroyed our friendship

No matter what happened
And whatever we it takes
I still remember
When we promise each other
Our friendship will be forever
Till we growing old

And till the end of our life
Friendship never fades...

I never expect our friendship suddenly broke
We've suddenly hurts of each other Feelings
The friendship we care and promise to be forever
Now its fading...

Though this friendship was broke
I will always keep the sweet memories that we had!

***life is incomplete with out friend.. all of us have a very special friend! it is not easy to find a real friend in life, a true friend whom u can trust, support and always being there w/ u if u need them. its difficult to lost a friend more the friendship is to much deeply. so if u have a true friend keep it and you have care that friendship coz for me i cant live without friends in life coz they are also the reasons why my life are more beautiful and colorful!***

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  • Another good poem, but those grammatical errors make it look a bit bad. It's still good cause it's about friendship. Great job. 4/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Good job
    i too have felt this a time or two
    great job
    nice work

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I think you have done better, but it is still good.

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    I think you have a very unique writing style. 5/5. Comment / Rate back most recent please.

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    I like it!
    Though it sad to lose a special friend, I think everything as a reason.
    Keep on writing..
    -singko-