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I love it.

Hey! Beautiful poem! Short yet wonderfully done. I love the lines:

"losing all hope of freedom
fading, all signs of light
so much for me to regret
haunting my once peaceful night"

Nicely said. The only thing I would suggest is, maybe you can add some comma's and periods are each line, just so that it might give the reader more direction. But it's not a must.

Anyways, keep up the awesome work! woot! 5/5

--Angie xoxo