Paper Wings

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Jul 12, 2006


I got paper wings
That cant fly very good
But there enough
To keep flying
Higher every time Im falling
They pull me up
And keep me going
Making me have dreams
Of a place much better then this
A land of fairy tells
And unreal creatures
I escape my pain
With my paper wings

{{For A Contest}}

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Kewl.....did u win....

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    The poem was short and got th message across but there are too man grammar and spelling errors to give this a five. I sort of get the whole paper wings thing but that wasn't clear enough to understand. :(

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    The poem was short and got th message across but there are too man grammar and spelling errors to give this a five. I sort of get the whole paper wings thing but that wasn't clear enough to understand. :(

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    4ever --
    I had to give this poem a 3/5. If you entered this in a contest, you REALLY should have read it more carefully. There are like, ten grammar mistakes in here, and this is a very short poem. Most of it doesn`t even make sense. The theme was very vague ;; I don`t understand the intent of paper wings. It seemed to have a somewhat steady flow, but there is room for improvement.

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Great Poem. Thanks for the comment about my "Missing" one.
    5/5

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