Is The End Near?

by cassie   Jul 14, 2006


Every day it gets worse,
like a nightmare with no escape,
please make time stop,
i cant take this pace

I got better for awhile,
some times happy, not always down
but lately its the opposite,
no longer a smile but a frown

Not a day goes past,
without the tears,
the screams,
the fears...

I fear that i can no longer do this,
giving up might be the way,
im sick of my suicidal thoughts,
where on my bed, i lay

I lay with pain and wonder,
of how people would react,
but then i come to reality,
this scene i can no longer act

I know suicide is selfish,
and i know it is wrong,
but the thoughts are just too powerful,
and the pain is just too strong.

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  • 17 years ago

    by FoundHim

    Another great one! Love this one as well...Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Amazing. A very good write. Powerful words- and an even stronger effect...
    Paints quite picture. 5/5

    Hannah-

  • 17 years ago

    by Eddie

    I'm always having those types of thoughts too but serious I never told anyone but dont treat those feelings as ur weakness do that opposite and make them your stregnth.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

    WOAH ..!!

    That was excellent ..!! keep it up ..!! ... oh and ... i know how it feels .. suicidal thoughts are very strong, and so hard to get over ..

  • 17 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    The last few stanzas are what made me really want to comment..the first few are a little too basic almost...like ive heard different variations of them before...i think we have a similar writing style/structure with the 2nd and last line always rhyming...but ive been changing mine a little for poems i write that i think need to be switched up a bit..overall good job and keep going...
    love ya lots,
    sore

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