Take My Heart

"Take My Kiss I Dare You
I'll Stitch It On Your Cheek
Forever Glowing Love
Thats Mind And Yours To Keep"

My favourite stanza. You wrote it with such power.
Great poem, Nikki, once again. Loved reading it.
All my love.
Emma xo

There are many times I've written on the same vein, and this is deffinately heartfelt and sincere. Keep up the good work.

Aww!!! I really liked this poem, it was one of the best i have read lately!! The flow and rhyme were wonderful!! I can relate to this poem!! You write so beautifully!! I loved this stanza it was so cute

"Take My Kiss I Dare You
I'll Stitch It On Your Cheek
Forever Glowing Love
Thats Mind And Yours To Keep"

The words you used were perfect!! Thank you so much for commenting on mine, i really appriciated it!!!! 5/5!!!! Well Done!!! Keep it up!!! oh and i was looking and your quotes and they were really good too!! Im Jealous!!!

A sweet melody has been painted in my mind with this poem .
I actually sang it.....I really did.....

Take My Soul I Dare You
See The Passion Deep Within
If Loving Yous a Crime
Then Your My Favorite Sin
^^
I think you meant .....
If Loving You Is A Crime

The last stanza is just heart melting...
Wonderful write Nikki, very enjoyable read

You have a gift for writing, but i think you already know that...:)