Silent Persausion

by Georgi   Jul 17, 2006


Look him in the face and he'll captivate your soul,
Linger like exhaustion in the dark.
Hook you to his heart so that you lose all control,
Preparing for the trip you must embark.

The journey of destruction startes as soon as you are caught,
In the trap of loving someone far from home.
The pain and mutual heartache which you simply cant abort,
Matches devastating truth - you are alone.

A once forgiven friend in whom your trust would always stay,
Proves the doubt and disappointment you had known,
To love her is misleading cause she pushes you away,
Subconsciously, you'll always be alone.

Smiling through the heartache gives an image you sustain,
That she see's you as a strong and able soul,
It becomes a constant battle to succeed and break the chain,
To be able to have pain you can control.

They can see you, standing, staring hard at your reflection,
It may seem tough to battle with deciet,
To know you is their blessing, but to love you is deception,
For the barrier you can't seem to defeat.

I guarentee there's noone who will WANT to break your heart,
Just suspicion of the way that it could break.
There's noone who will WANT to see it slowly ripped apart,
Only those suspicious of the constant ache.

Your silence is destructive, it can break the darkest look,
And there's others who don't understand your ways.
Your hidden, indecisive, yet they judge you like a book,
But still let you take their hands to lead astray.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Georgi

    LMFAO. biscuit head!!!! GOD that made me laugh. ahhahaha.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sick.&.Tired.Of.Waiting

    "Tho there are quite a few spelling mistakes"....wtf? Shut up! Did you not see YOUR simple spelling mistakes, Biscuit head?! Geese, arrogant son of a -beep-.

    But, for the most part, on the compliments, I agree with. It was a great poem, Geo. You're very insightful and loving and passionate about your writing and you can see it!! I love youuu!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Very strong structure, rhythm and rhyme, tho its not very deep adn there are quite a few spelling mistakes. still, ur writing shows confidence and maturity

    -biscuit-

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