THE TRUE TREASURE

by Yrem Crish   Jul 18, 2006


Sometimes you search for everything
and left behind for a new change
although the things you left behind are the people who care so much about you
but you leave and never care even if those people hurt because of you...

You dream the most high
and forget those people guide through your life
you seek the true happiness;
but you ignore what those people did for you to cherish.

And the time would come..
you go alone and stumble down
now, you need somebody to lean on...
to vanish your tears and cherish your gloom
then finally realize that people you left behind
are the true things you search for so long..
they are your family that never leaves you alone...

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  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    In terms of broadening your vocabulary, I can see you've taken leaps in the past years. What I've noticed is that your poems before didn't lose clarity compared to your poems now, as the coherence of your poems now fade in and out. If only you can be more consistent and maintain equilibrium, I think you'd grow more as a poet.

    "then finally realize that people you left
    behind
    are the true things you search for so long.."

    True and quote-worthy. A great read, keep writing
    -X