Fade away

by josh mills   Jul 18, 2006


AS you fade away,
I forget about that horrible day.
I begged you to stay but you just left me anyway.
All i had to do was say three words.
they seem so easy to say now,before they made me queasy,made me feel trapped.i wish we could have ended better,thats why I'm writing this letter. I'm sorry for the pain i caused you the day i lost you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kat

    I like this you are a very good writer and Keep up the great work!!

    -Kat

  • 17 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    The three words that are either the kiss of death or the key to heaven.... they create so much contraversy .... and they cause hurt in the one thing that it should heal....love..... great subject and the perfect instance to show the effects of the three most simply complicated words... excellent job

  • 17 years ago

    by katie

    Aww that is soo sweet! x

  • 17 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    I like this poem. It is very well written. keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by josh mills

    I hope everyone like this one

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