My Suicidal Note Part Six

by 111308   Jul 20, 2006


She restarts and goes deeper into the skin this time…
The skin that once was clear beautiful skin….
Without any tares….
Her skin begins to separate….
Outward and outward it goes…..
The blood comes pouring out….
Like a beautiful river…
Then all of a sudden she hit something….
And feel this immediate sharp pain…
She screams …..
She yells…
She cries….
She yelps….
The blood flow is increasing….
And her body is loosing blood…
And loosing it fast…
She don’t want this pain to last…
It hurt so much…
She lays her head down….
She lies in her bed…
The pain starts to drift away….
As her body goes numb…
Her arm starts to tingle…
Her body lay weak…
She can’t move any part of it…
Her eyes start to get heavy…
Her body gets cold….
She never felt this feeling before…
She finally has troubles breathing…
And then all of a sudden her heart stops beating…
She lay in a puddle of her blood…
Cold and dead…
Lying in her bed….
I realized this girl was me…
And I awake from my dream…
I had fallen asleep…
Thinking about some things…
And I think to myself this is what’s going to happen to me….
I hate my life…
At least some of the time…
Please I’m asking someone to come save me…
I don’t want to end my life…
I need someone to help me…
Please anybody….
Just help me with this fight…
This fight to die…
The fight for suicide….
The suicidal note…
I had just wrote in this poem…
If for all of you to know…
So maybe you can help me….
Just help me…
PLEASE….

If You Actually Took The Time To Read This...Thanks So Much...I Worked Really Hard...And It Took A Little While...So Thanks For Everything And I'd Really Liked It If You Commented It And Rated It...Cause I Want To See If It's Good Enough..
Thanks
♥Steph♥

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow that was AMAZING! i read all 6 parts! wow...this had so much emotion...so much...wow-ness! i'm speechless! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Well done, a brilliant end to a great series of poems. There is something I need to suggest. Put these poems into a stanza, like a verse. It makes it so much easier for the reader to read. Also, get them editted. I'm too busy to do each poem right now, so maybe another time. Great effort, and they came out great. There were a few problems with some of them poems, but overall it was a great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by amanda

    Hey girl. . this poem touched me, i know what its liek to feel like that and as hayley commented ive been through it all aswell, alot of people have to dont feel alone. .if you eva need to talk my msn is xxmiss_cheekyxx@hotmail.com just add me im always up for a chat. . mwah xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by hayley

    Awesome! it really is. if ya need 2talk, im here....im only 13, but ive been thru cutting and suicide and all tht. so give me a shout!

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah debrincat

    That was really touching, and it was a great poem, i feel like that alot of the time, and if you ever need someone to talk to you can talk to me. luv sarah x0x

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