Not Sure Of A Title

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Jul 21, 2006


Touch the morning,
A glimpse of rain,
A inkling of burning,
A reasonable insane.

A laughing cry,
A gentle scream,
A truthful lie,
In lost dreams.

A pleasent hate,
A maliced love,
A dreaming wake,
A gravity above.

*I wasn't sure where to put this, so here it landed.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa Lea

    I think this is great, and I'd love to help you with a title, but I have none.....one thing, the correct spelling is pleasant.

  • 17 years ago

    by Alexis Frank

    I really loved this poem. I especially love your use of oxymorons in it.

    A laughing cry,
    A gentle scream,
    A truthful lie

    and so on...

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Ohh. Creative. It was short but really nicely done. It's unique and that's good cause there isn't anything I love more the Dark Unique and creative poems. Exellent Job.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*im_the_best_at_ruining _my_life*~

    Devious feelings....i dunno i just thought thatd be a good title but it's ver good...

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    W0W! Im, again, speechless. I like how you wrote this poem!

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