Part 1

by Vicissitude Of Fate   Jul 23, 2006

Part 1

She was only fifteen
She took her life away
She couldn't take the pain
She told herself she couldn't stay

She loved him very much
But he didn't have a clue
He didn't even know she liked him
She knew she couldn't make it through

She didn't know how to tell him
All the feelings she felt inside
So she figured by cutting herself he might notice
She never thought it would go so far as suicide

It went to far
The cuts got deeper
And she thought he couldn't see
And her pain; it still lingers

~Part two is almost done. This really isn't the way
I usually write (The whole part one part two thing)
But it was something new that I was trying. I hope
I have not dissapointed anyone with it not being
the best poem ever, but I tried. Please rate and
Comment and I will be posting the second one as soon
as I feel it's done!~



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  • 16 years ago

    by JLT

    YOU KICK ARSE MY WEE LITTLE WANDA. I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU!!! It's great to have the internet back... Anyways, YOU'RE THE BEST POET EVERSSSS. To me... Just so you don't think i'm just trying to make you feel good... I LIE NOT.

  • 16 years ago

    by samara.jr

    This is nice.. it goes with a story, and i like reading stories... :)

  • 16 years ago

    by alana

    Wow for it bein your first time writin a part 1 n 2
    that is really good!!
    your a great writer..
    keep it up!
    always alana[[check out ma site]]

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