Part 2

by Vicissitude Of Fate   Jul 24, 2006


Part 2

They were good friends
He always had feelings for her
But when he heard she killed herself
His mind went in a blur

He regretted every silent word
That he wanted to say
Especially three in particular
He wished she would have stayed

He went to her funeral
He couldn't believe his eyes
All of their faces were on him
He knew it was his fault she commited suicide

He apologized to everyone
And gave a little speech
Hoping that his words
To her ears could somehow reach

That was three years ago
And even till this day
He'll never forget his suicide love
Her memory was the only thing that stayed..

~I know. It's been forever since I have posted but now that
I have the internet back I shall post as much as I can. I would
really like everyone to rate and comment if it's possible. I
would appreciate everyone to tell me what they think about it
and tell me if it was good or not. I've been having writters block
and haven't been able to write much, but please rate and/or comment.
I will return the favor!~

~Mallory~

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  • 15 years ago

    by JLT

    And if I had it to do all over... I'd do it all over again. If tomorrow I found one more chance to begin... I'd love you all over again. =']

  • 16 years ago

    by JLT

    Guess what, Mallory... I'M A FRIGGIN' IDIOT.
    Love me.
    Jessica.

  • 16 years ago

    by JLT

    Hey, Mallory... I think your... 'Tractor'... Is sexy... And i'm crazy about that farmer's tan you got right there. It gets me all moist and wet inside, if ya catch my drift... OOO. I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BEST poet ever. The best.

  • 16 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    I am proud to give this a 5/5. It is really good work. A simalar event has happened to me, and I think that it is wonderful that you can take things that happen so ordinarily and turn it into a poem. Great work.

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