This Cruel Fantasy

by Thoughtless Consideration   Jul 24, 2006


And these sounds are killing me
And these sounds are soothing me

And these colors are blinding me
And these colors are saving me

And these words are torturing my heart
And yet these words are erasing the dark

These secret passions
Of the sounds,
The colours,
The words,
Are hating me.

You lose yourself in reality,
While I lose myself in cruel fantasy.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this is amazingly written, I love every line. You expressed emotions in it greatly, it is so deep and touching. I can relate to it. Whole piece is very unique.
    5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    Lol thanks chloe,
    you are totally the poet, as well. ha

  • 17 years ago

    by Pondering Thoughts Of Nothing

    U are such the poet.i love this pom to lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Pondering Thoughts Of Nothing

    U are such the poet.i love this pom to lol

  • 17 years ago

    by xlovelyxdespairx

    Fantastic poem.Really love it.

    much luv,
    Jubilee

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