The pressures on

by ENTROPY   Jul 26, 2006


Skip out on lunch
dont weigh too much
eat a whole bunch
and puke in the toilet

wear lots of makeup
cover your face
you dont need another breakup
so go all the way

start doing drugs
ruin your life
your grave is already dug
leave all of your passion and love

go with the crowd
fall into parties and drinking
your not allowed
who ever said you would listen

smoking is not new
you want to quit
the last few puffs you blew
but you just started up again

control yourself
get good grades
monitor your health
wait for your flight, it got delayed

be a good girl
save our lives
put your hair in curls
and look like all the rest of the prostitues

the pressures on
you have to give in
the wait wont be long
so count all of your sins

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  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Ups, sorry, I have gave you 5 not 4! Sorry about that.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I really liked the ending line, but the flow of the poem seemed broken and unsure of itself.

    xDarkSuicidex 4.5

  • 17 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Another great poem. i love this one too. i can relate to this poem.. u have talent. so keep writing. i like ur poems so i will keep reading.. great job 5/5
    take care
    angie