Lost

by *Sweet as your worst nightmare*   Jul 29, 2006


Calling your name
Searching for your heart
Are you gone from me forever?
Or are you searching for me to?
I sit and stare out my window
watching the rain pour
Trying not to shed a tear
But wondering where you went

Watching the door for your return
Living that momnet over agian
The moment you left me
This purple haze covers my heart
It covers me day and night
Hiding me from the light
Killing me day and night
Knowing it will not end

Brittni Nicole Leiker

Copyright ©2006 Brittni Nicole Leiker

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  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Brittni --
    You did a nice job on this one. You used correct grammar, though some of your lines could have used commas. The flow was much better -- but again, I`m going to suggest self-evaluation. You need to personally KNOW and accept what other people are reading BEFORE you post it. Then you`ll know what needs fixing, and what works out. Nice job, 5/5.
    I think I`ve done enough of your poems for now. =D I`ll do more later.

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

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