by Nelle Jul 30, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
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Cheer up babygirl, it will all be okay |
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Excellent poem. I love your descriptions fo friendship. You oobviously are a wonderful friend. keep up the good work. 5/5 Loretta |
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Nelle -- |
by Tara Kay
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I liked this poem, it was well written, rhyming was good, and not forced, flowed pretty well. i noticed an error, where you wrote "you're beautiful girl", should it be You're a beautiful girl? |
by Socks
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I really liek this poem.. as i've written to other poets, i can feel the emotion that you wrote this poem with. |
by Nancy
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Very beautiful written!! |