Precious

by Nelle   Jul 30, 2006


Cheer up babygirl, it will all be okay
Take my hand and walk with me today
I will take away your pain
I will be the one to keep you sane

You have such a pretty smile
Let it show more then once in awhile
You're gorgeous sweetheart
Without you I would fall apart

Listen to me and open your eyes
One of these days you will realize
Things are going to be alright
You will see that there is light

Walk with me down this dark path
I will make your smile always last
Believe in me, when I say it's okay
Trust me when I say you'll be happy one day

I'm here for you and you know that's true
I will be with you no matter what you go through
I love you so much, more then you know
Maybe one day it will really show

Remember this as I get offline at night
Don't be in fear, there is no reason to be in fright
My heart is with you and that will keep you safe
You'll always hear my voice saying " Please behave"

When you get down, come to me
I will show you how it's meant to be
I will make you smile
And I will definitely show you this friendship is worth while

( I love you, Precious )

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  • 17 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Excellent poem. I love your descriptions fo friendship. You oobviously are a wonderful friend. keep up the good work. 5/5 Loretta

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Nelle --
    I LOVED this! It was really cute, and the flow and rhyming was perfect. Sorry for the bit of delay for this comment ;; had a phone call! You did a wonderful job, keep this up for sure. I love reading your work! 5/5

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I liked this poem, it was well written, rhyming was good, and not forced, flowed pretty well. i noticed an error, where you wrote "you're beautiful girl", should it be You're a beautiful girl?
    the last line seemed a little long for me, but the poem was good overall
    xxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Socks

    I really liek this poem.. as i've written to other poets, i can feel the emotion that you wrote this poem with.
    great job keep up the good work :)
    Its one of my favourite poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nancy

    Very beautiful written!!

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