Be My Fantasy

by Dark Kitten   Aug 2, 2006


Be my fantasy,
Sweet love of mine,
Color my skies of indigo,
And be thy great Divine,
Soar above the moonlit path,
To places so unknown,
That I would paint the world a color,
To suit the seed I've sewn.

Be my fantasy,
Great man of stone,
Cover my world in silken grace,
And never leave thy alone,
Give me strength above all else,
Lighten the weight to carry,
That I would need a many days,
Alone the burden to very.

Be my fantasy,
Shining knight of gold,
Fill the void within my heart,
Thy forever be so bold,
Feather light would be my feet,
Which walk on pillows of snow,
That I would know nothing of grief,
For you would never go.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow
    great work!
    keep it up
    -Lisa

  • 18 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I thought this was excellent. The flow was brilliant, and the descriptions were wonderful. Excellent job.

    By the way, sorry for just getting round to your 10 comments now, I've just been so busy. =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is great! You have a very discrptive way of writing that just pulls the reader right in. Excellent!

  • 18 years ago

    by michael

    Be your fanasty ok lol just jokin keep up the good work i

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    Now this one i love!
    The words almost seemed magical, if that makes sense.
    I love love poems and this one is amazing, it's very different from the normal ones i read and you seemed to put a lot of heart into this piece, it's excellent
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

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